The purpose of an Essay is to demonstrate or develop the ability to construct a coherent argument and employ critical thinking skills.

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Hello Nhat Ngo,

I would say that matches quite closely to description of 'essay' given here.

 

Best wishes,

Peter

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Hi this is Arun
I have completed my IMI and EVI course @BC and its glad to be back !
I wonder if i can get some help with ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY like the structure of essay and details to be included .....and all of those stuffs :)

Hello Arun,

Great! I'd suggest you start with the Structure 1 page, specifically either the exposition or discussion organisations that are suggested in the chart. You might also find the for and against essay page on LETeens and the Purdue Online Writing Lab's page on argumentative essays useful.

All the best,
Kirk
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hello could you help me in the wrong this essay.
The girls and women make half of society and they could make better society with capability.
In society every person has a roll, when everybody doing his work good the society improves. Women are parts of human body. The human body is faulty without women. When we could not use of the capacity of women, we abdicate the society of half of his ability. For example we could had many more women like Emmy Noether in word, but we could not provide the base of improvement of girls in word. We read to the essay The Future of STEM in the Hands of Girls "A study conducted for the L’Oreal Foundation and published in September 2015 reports that approximately 67% of the Europeans surveyed, including women, believe that women do not have the abilities necessary for making a career in science. More than half of the responders believe, further, that women have no interest in science". We must change our thought ratio to capacity of women in science.
Families should provide basis education for girls until they could promotion in science. Families are basic of every society, and they make activity person and scholarly. Therefore parents must very notice to education of his girls. The teach of girls is important of boys because the girls one day will be mother and she must teach her children. "We must generate strategies to motivate girls towards science and help young female scientists to persist in the face of barriers on the difficult path to high-level scientific positions. Remembering women scientists and including them in our textbooks is important for our target of a truly equal society".

Hello shahdadamri,

This is a nice essay, but I'm afraid we don't offer the service of correcting users' writing, as we are simply too small a team with too much work to be able to do this. I will make one quick comment, however: check the word 'roll' in the dictionary, as it is not the word you mean (try 'role' instead).

All the best,
Kirk
The LearnEnglish Team

Can you please help me rectify this sentence, I know something is wrong in the following sentence but I don't know what and why. Sentence is "Raju found it difficult to explain his final exam marks to his parents".

Hello diptisahu6,

That sentence looks fine to me - I don't see anything wrong with it.

Best wishes,

Peter

The LearnEnglish Team

Dear, Teatchers:
can you please correct with me this short paragraf. please.

"The good mind in the good health" as the Arabic proverb said. That's why to build a good health we should play sports, as the doctors said. All the kind of sports are good to our health.But, we can not play all the kind of sports in a short time. And sometimes we prefer some kind of sports than athers. For me, I like football and running. Running sport easier to play. And Its better if you play running in the early morning to get a breath of fresh air. That help you to start new day happily and stronger. Also, I prefer football. It played in all the corner of the street by children. Football create a sense of competition. In addition to build a strong health, it also build asense of cooperation in the group.I can't forget walking sport. It's my lovely sport because it's need no efort. I prefer to play this sport near the sea or in the garden. It's make you feel with pleasure and calm. In all, all kinds of sports are good to our health. But you should choose the sport that make you feel more comforte.

Hello hajora003,

I'm afraid we don't offer the service of correcting users' writing, simply because if we did, we'd soon have time for nothing else. I will say, however, that this is some good work; I'd suggest dividing it into two or three paragraphs – certainly a new one should begin where you start to talk about your preferences.

All the best,
Kirk
The LearnEnglish Team

Hello,Mr Kirk;
I'm sorry to put you in this situation. I give you parden. I understand your sidepoint.
thank you so much for your note I will take it.

Best wishes,
Hajora003

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