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Improvements to Oak Hall

Introduction

This report aims to describe problems in Oak Hall of Residence and discuss possible maintenance work to solve them. The two biggest issues were discussed at a meeting on 12 May, which was attended by 165 of the 250 students who live in the building.

Issue 1: temperature in rooms

A number of students complained that the second-floor bedrooms are too hot. Concerns were raised about lack of sleep and students finding it hard to study in their rooms. Air conditioning was suggested as a possible solution.

However, there is no budget left for installing air conditioning this academic year. Also, installation can only be carried out during holidays as students cannot be present in the building while the work takes place.

Issue 2: improving wheelchair access to Oak Café

It was noted that wheelchair users can only access Oak Café from the back and not the front entrance nearer the lifts. This makes access to the café difficult for wheelchair users. The university is looking to improve its wheelchair access in general by installing ramps in key areas and work can take place during term time with no issues for staff or students.

Conclusion and recommendations

Taking the factors mentioned into account, August would be the best time for the installation of air conditioning. Until then, the university could consider supplying fans to each second-floor room so students can sleep and study comfortably.

The front of the café is recommended as an ideal place to install a wheelchair ramp. This work can take place immediately and should be a priority.

Tips

  1. Start with the aim of the report and say where the information comes from.
  2. Use subheadings to make the layout clear. Follow a logical structure, e.g.:
    • Introduction
    • The problem(s) (Give each issue a separate section)
    • Conclusion and recommendations
  3. Assume the person reading the report has asked you to write it and needs only a brief introduction to the situation.
  4. Use an impersonal, formal style.
  5. Use the passive to keep the focus off individual people:
    Concerns were raised about ...
    ... was suggested ...
  6. You should also use objective language for recommendations and conclusions:
    ... would be the best …
    the university could consider ...
    ... is recommended ...

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Suspension of request for payment

Introduction

This report aims to describe the grievances of JSS students and discuss possible panacea for them. The two major issues were discussed at a meeting on July 17, 2020 which was well attended by 135 out of 141 students expected.

Issue 1: The request for school fee

Two weeks ago, the management of this great citadel of learning mandated all JSS students to pay their school fee before August Concerns were raised about how difficult it is for their parents to make money amid this pandemic. It was also mentioned that schools have not been permitted to open officially and payment of tuition would be out of place. It was also said that schools might not be allowed to resume till next year and the whole session might be cancelled. So asking for schools is not in. their interest but it is for the personal aggrandisement of the proprietor.

issue 2: Request for examination fee

It is noted all most everyone has paid nearly 80 percent of the fee. And since there is no certainty that schools will resume any time soon, it is unbelievable that the school is threatening us that it would withdrawal our names from its candidates' list. In contrary, the management is expected to assure them that it would refund their money should government cancel the examination due to closure of schools.

Conclusion and recommendations

Considering all the factors mentioned above, it would be out of place to ask the students to pay tuition or examination fee. It would be recommended that management seeks the financial assistance of their students' parents in order to finance their running expenses.

It would also be thoughtful of the school to save the money already paid for examination and be ready to use it for tuition should government cancel the exam.

Increase Sales in the next two months

- Introduction
This report aims to describe problems in sales volume and suggest new strategies to improve the situation. Two key issues were discussed at a meeting on 5 July, including the participation of distributors representatives and all salespeople.

- Issue 1: Lack of sales service
Based on the sales reports for the past three months, June sales volume showed no increase. A number of retailers have stopped ordering the new 700ml fish sauce. The cause was determined by lack of sales service, although the number of new retail partners were steadily increasing.
The suggested solution was to stop looking for new customers and focus on existing partners. All sales employees need to continue tracking sales of each retailer, therefore the retailer will have supply before they need it.

- Issue 2: In need of more staff
On the salesman side, they could not handle the market with the current number of people.
But as issue 1 has pointed out, the problem lies in the sales service activity. The supervisor also stated there would be no recruiting until the situation is overcome and sales volume increase again.

- Conclusion:
The priority objectives for July and August include:
The sales team needs to build stronger relationships with clients who are near around and potential. Also temporarily ignore far or small-scale retailers.
After consolidating the market, hiring new employees will be considered depending on the situation.

Could you explain something confuses me, please?
"Concerns were raised about lack of sleep and students finding it hard to study in their rooms." I just wonder "finding" is a verb with ing came after a subject. I want to know more about how to use 'verb+ing' after subject without helping verb?

Hello la17mi,

This is an example of an -ing form used as a postmodifier of a noun phrase.

Sometimes these are reduced relative clauses where the relative pronoun and auxiliary verb are omitted:

I am worried about people sleeping on the street.

I am worried about people who are sleeping on the street.

 

Sometimes, as in your case, there is a different implied phrase:

Concerns were raised about the lack of sleep and the fact that students are finding it hard to study in their rooms.

 

There are a number of different ways to modify nouns, both pre-modifying and post-modifying, and you can read about them and practise them on this page:

https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/english-grammar-reference/noun-phrases

 

Peter

The LearnEnglish Team

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Problem 3: there is no green or free area to be able to do any outdoor activity,
which when exercising in a room presents odor problems, fatigue due to shortness of breath for students.
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